Writing Narrative

Learner: Toni                           Learning Coach: Mr Hattie          Date: 4 July 2016

Learning Area: Learning Habitat 1 - Writing

Learning Observed

For writing this term Toni have been focusing on persuasive writing. He has been developing his Capabilities about this type of writing by learning what the idea of persuasive writing is and how to give points and examples that help persuade their readers. Toni has a good handle on the points that he writing about. He is able to provide sufficient examples to provide to help explain his ideas. Toni has been enjoy Collaborating with his/her peers when writing by discussing his points of view and why he thinks this.

Evidence of learning

Toni’s Quickwrite about why learner should have to wear uniform.

Next Learning Steps

Toni’s next learning steps are: Describe the writing so that it paints a picture in the reader's head. Use a variety of different sentence types e.g. simple, compound and complex sentences. Use paragraphs to show new ideas.